[ She's critiquing him already? He's barely had time to process what he was doing...]

I'm getting to that. Let me take at least a little time and enjoy you.

[His body shifts, hips rocking against her just a little to experiment, which shoots pleasure through his entire body. His tongue trails up her breast, to the crook of her neck before capturing her mouth.

Finally sliding out of her unbelievably slowly until he almost reached his tip before sliding back into the awaiting heat of her.

It was like the stars exploded. Breath caught between a gasp and a moan, he pulled his mouth away just so he could breathe.]

Liar. Still isn't real.